Early Morning Offering

To succeed in this world meant a strong career

And she supported him by taking care of their home

They slept on their own sides of their king sized bed

But in the morning his hand would find the small of her back

And “love” was the first word between her ears before her eyes were even open.

8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mary
    Apr 18, 2012 @ 09:27:25

    Lovely, touching and full of feeling. I love it!

    Reply

  2. nelle
    Apr 18, 2012 @ 09:37:25

    So succinct, yet so much conveyed. 🙂

    Reply

  3. lily2u1
    Apr 18, 2012 @ 20:32:38

    Those last two lines could not be more lovely, nor more full of love. ~ Lily

    Reply

  4. readinpleasure
    Apr 19, 2012 @ 01:43:56

    So much conveyed (comforting and trusting love) with so few words

    Reply

    • jeglatter
      Apr 19, 2012 @ 11:16:32

      Thank you. Feel comfortable with few words…wishing I would try writing chapters more like you.:)
      -Jennifer

      Reply

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