Authenticity

When a woman

chooses to open to her self

she forgets the appearance to please

instead she spends her time

naked

bathing in her truth

like an oak standing in the sun

her beauty becomes

as light shadows dancing on green leaves.

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. literary lew
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 05:01:55

    Great poem!

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  2. sandy
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 05:19:50

    Very nice!

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  3. nelle
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 05:21:23

    Such image provoking, and i am there, dancing!

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  4. cindydyer
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 05:43:25

    Really, really nice! (hope you’re not offended, but you need to make just one tiny change—you need an extra “o” in “chooses.” (Sorry, it’s my editor hat coming out!)

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  5. restinginawareness.com
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 06:01:22

    This is one of your best 🙂

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  6. Susan L Daniels
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 06:01:35

    Beautifully said–love the image and the language is, as always, pure music. Would love to hear you read this aloud 🙂

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    • jeglatter
      Apr 23, 2012 @ 18:16:51

      Thank you Susan for hearing the music and for letting me know. I’m getting a microphone for my monthly writers group so I can try reading aloud this week. Fun!

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      • Susan L Daniels
        Apr 23, 2012 @ 18:25:14

        Do it! We just had this awesome, huge poetry marathon in my city this weekend I was able to participate in 🙂

        That’s what inspired the “Amateur poets” piece

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  7. Kris Kennedy
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 06:22:44

    How beautiful…if we all knew that…so good to hear and share…

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  8. Fiona Pimentel
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:31:05

    I like this a lot, and can really relate to it at the moment.

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  9. Casey B
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:34:04

    Thank you for sharing your writing with the world. This is a beautiful poem, and a call to action in one. I look forward to reading more of your work- and thank you very much for the support you’ve shown in following my blog.

    Best wishes,

    Casey

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  10. boomiebol
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 10:24:54

    I love this! You manage to capture truth and beauty with so few words.Well done!!

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  11. momentswithmillie
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 13:50:19

    As always, beautiful. Your writing is as sweet as opening up an exotic box of chocolates. Always a surprise!!!

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  12. Cindy Holman
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 19:44:09

    This is great!

    Reply

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